The submission of Baby Jane
By H.Brown
There is no such thing as black and white in real life, only shades of grey that blur and merge into one-another. Don't be fooled into believing that all we observe is really all we are seeing, our eyes and senses are often deceived. This story though short in length covers many such shadows and shades just when you think you have seen all I hope you discover a new mental image. Your own imagination is the most powerful thing that this story can hopefully unleash, I hope with this story I manage to open a few eyes to a world that lays hidden and secretive even today. It is a world that is feared for it is simply different to that which we see all around us or at least believe we are observing.
The Submission of Baby Jane (strictly for Adults)
Prologue …
At this point I feel I should remind any reader that this is a work of dark BDSM fiction, the
emphasis on the word fiction. It is not a statement of any intent nor any kind of personal
reflection by the author, all the characters and events depicted are totally fictitious, any
resemblance to anyone living or dead is purely coincidental. If easily offended by work of such
nature please feel free not to read further... Some sections are darker than others but all play a
small part in the story.
I wrote this purely from a personal point of view in that I wanted to create a story with real
atmosphere and one that could possibly lead the reader on a journey into the dark misty world of
BDSM Fantasy. It is written in eight parts each leading into the next until it concludes, it was
originally written in the first person view but I feel that this new version is far better and much
more detailed...
As a reader you may want to pause and reflect between each part or simply dive into the
following section, that is your choice, I hope those that take the trouble and time to read this
work enjoy this brief outing into fantasy. If it inspires anyone to write anything of a similar
nature then I feel that I have done my craft well.
(Remember that real life is often far more cruel than fiction, please bear this in mind when
reading this short work) *
A dreamer awakes ( Part One)
Jane Monroe stirred in her sleep, her mind feeling foggy and slow. She felt the warm wet touch
of her sweat as it ran down her body. Her arms and shoulders ached, wrists and ankles feeling
strangely sore. There was an unfamiliar heavy feeling of an iron collar pressing on her neck, the
metallic rattle of the chain that held it tight. Around her ankles iron shackles rubbed against her
bare skin, the 3 foot long spreader bar between them, anchored to the cool dirty concrete floor of
that dark cellar. The sound of trees blown by strong winds and crickets outside the cellar's walls.
Between her legs there was a drain set into the concrete floor which her wide open legs
straddled. Her black nightie hung open from her aching shoulders, torn and ripped leaving her
breasts and soft downy furry cunt ,closely trimmed but left to grow in a soft tender blanket,
exposed.
Stirring, Jane tried to ease her aching shoulders but discovered her arms were stretched out
above her head, wrists in metal shackles and chained about 12” apart.
“what the fuck ? “ Jane's mind screamed as the fog started to slowly clear ...A long thick Iron
chain hung from a large black cast iron evil looking meat hook above her head, set into thick
worn timbers that support the ceiling. The only light in that cellar coming from a single bare light
bulb that burns weakly. No windows to speak of save for the small vent set high up in the wall
behind her through which the sounds of some distant woodland outside drifted in.
The floorboards above Jane creaked, loud course laughter and the sound of bottles emptying as
glasses met .. To Jane's right a single door was set into the red brick wall, it's faded paint peeling.
her mouth was dry and she had no idea of the time or her location, or how long she had been
there in that cellar. Snatched from the warm comfort of her big soft bed and friendly warn
familiar bedroom in the middle of the night. Fearful of her surroundings she started to scream
and cry for help as her senses started to return. Jane's limbs struggling in the tight
robust iron constraints...
“Oh holy fuck … “ Jane's rapidly waking mind cried when her eyes adjusted too their
surroundings. On the wall facing her, Jane's eyes start to make out a carefully laid array of sexual
toys and BDSM tools.. Most of the stuff she had only ever seen in pictures and images on her
pink laptop when curiosity had gotten the better of Jane one night after her then boyfriend had
suggested to her that he wanted to try tying her up. At first she thought this was some kind of
prank her boyfriend had dreamed up, wanting to experiment with some kinky foreplay, some
kind of strong demanding sexual role play act. Not believing that this was real, hoping that the
iron shackles and chains would come off as soon as she either screamed and cried enough or
gave into her boyfriend's new kinky demands. Vowing to get revenge on him as soon as she was
free...
“OK Bobby the joke's fucking over, now let me out of these things !” Jane waited, shouting at the
top of lungs, “come on you kinky bastard if you are going fuck me then get it over with , I
expect you to buy me a new nightie .. “ Jane shook her head, clearing it as much as she could,
wondering how on earth her boyfriend had managed to get her down here, where-ever here was ?
“And when I find out who helped you they are gonna be sorry...!” Jane threatened angrily her
mood rapidly sinking, no longer caring for her boyfriend's idea of a kinky sexy drama.
In the top far corner of the cellar a red light blinked... it's low-light camera capturing all the girl's
actions. The stairs behind that faded peeling door creaked, two black masked figures appeared as
the door handle turned and they entered the cellar.
“Nice disguises Bobby, who is your friend is that Tommy or maybe it' s Roy ?“ Jane stared at the
two disguised hidden faces. “Come on guys a joke's a fucking joke let me out of these things,
playtime is over...” A deep scowl crossed Jane's face. “Look guys I don't care for this kinky shit
any longer, so FUCKING LET ME OUT OF HERE ! “ Jane shrieked loudly at the top of her
voice. Her eyes staring at the two men in their black ski masks, trying to make out who was
hiding behind the masks. Both wearing dirty faded denim jeans, oil stains that ran down thick,
strong, powerful thighs. The pair laughed again … only this time they were not in the room
above but directly in front of the captive Jane.
” So the whore has woken up at last ...” The first says with a deep southern drawl.
“She sure has J .. they must have heard her plumb near right across the creek ...” the second
laughs.
“Huh …. who the fuck are you two ? Heckle and Jeckle I don't fucking know who put you up to
this but when I get out of here I am gonna make him fucking sorry …” Jane cursed spitting at the
men as the closed the door behind them and approached the hanging captive.
“Won't do her no good will it K ?” The first of the two men replied joking. “No-one comes this
way cept us and these whores...” his hand wiping the spit from his mask, the back of his hand
flying across the short distance between them catching Jane across the cheek and lip..
“That's so damn true J “ The second joins in... spitting into the stinging face of the captive
teenage girl...
“So scream all you want you FUCKING BITCH ! cuz no body is gonna save ya !” The first
man known as J added as he and his partner turned away from a very surprised and shocked
Jane. So used to getting her own way in her closeted, soft comfort lined life. Unable to take in
this newly discovered situation.
“Look guys enough is enough let me down please this cuff things are hurting me, you've had
your fun her the joke's over, I give in, I'll do what ever you want, just let me down..
Please ?” Jane tried to summon all her remaining composure and self restraint whilst secretly
planning to scream bloody murder and reek revenge on the pair once she was free. The two men
turned their backs on her, leaving her hanging from those chains and iron shackles,walking over
to the wall of toys and BDSM tools.
Standing under the weak pale light, the men ignored the young girl's pleas and crying.. Jane's
tears running down her face as the pair start to make their selections from the vast array that
covered the wall, everything from whips and floggers, to surgical spreaders and pin wheels. The
wall was like a living catalogue of BDSM paraphernalia. A who's who of the BDSM equipment
world, all ready and waiting to be used by skill-full hands.
“What you planing on using J ?” The Second one known as K asked as he picked up a nasty
black and red leather , rigid looking chastity belt. The internal parts concealing a pair of thick
dildos, one shorter than the other. Meant to be inserted into the victim's two lower holes. The
longer of the pair 8” long and 2.5” thick, the shorter 5” long and 2” thick , both ribbed and dark
in a flesh like material.
“I reckon this will do for a start and I fancy using that studded paddle that you got to use last
time” J said loud enough for the tearful Jane to hear, her voice stumbling over her words,
sobbing now and pleading for release. His voice heavily accented in that deep southern drawl
carrying clear across the hollow sounding basement.
K took the chastity belt and felt the hard rigid leather in his hands. His fingers enjoying the feel
and strength it contained, the promise it offered to the forth coming entertaining spectacle. The
first man J picked up one of the numerous paddles that decorated the walls, some studded some
plain various sizes and widths... but all hungrily waiting to taste a victim's soft flesh.
“Well if you'all are gonna fill the whore's fuck holes with them toys make sure you lube the
bitch's cunt and ass with some hot sauce... “ J said as he picked up a set of nipple & clitoris
clamps that are linked by chain. Adding it to the paddle he had already chosen,“and I reckon I
will use this old thing on the fucking bitch's tits and back “ he said laughing as his fingers closed
around a 36” long riding crop. The crop's slim black length covered shaft tipped by a small
leather flap. The item able to deliver pain or pleasure when used by a skilled Master or Mistress.
The slim shaft not the only point of delivery, the tip having it's uses too...
The pair turned to face their captive, showing the frightened girl their selections, laughing as
they approached Jane who still hung from the ceiling chain and iron shackles.
“Please enough is enough.. I wont say anything about this guys, just …..just let me outa
please ?” Jane begged through her sobbing tears …
“reckon the bitch is gonna love this don't you J ?” K teased as he coated the two dildo's liberally
in hot sauce. Smearing both with enough of the sticky red spicy sauce to cause the fearful Jane a
great deal of painful discomfort.
His partner J grabbed Jane's tits fixing the steel clamps onto her nipples as he pulled them till
they grew stiff and hard enough to take the steel vicious looking teeth of the clamps… Looping
the slim lightweight linking chain down Jane's smooth flat stomach, much practised fingers
spread Jane's cunt lips wide open. Rubbing her clitoris till it too rises and stiffens ...”now for
your clit bitch ..” he laughs as the girl screams. The steel teeth biting into her clitoris. Smiling at
his handiwork he pulled and tightened the chain between the girl's clitoris and nipples so that it
remained tight and each jerk of her body sent shocks through those sensitive parts.
He stepped back as 'K' opened up the rigid looking chastity belt, pushing it firmly into place,
making sure both Jane's cunt and ass are filled with the hot sauce coated dildos.
“sure hope she likes hot sauce … “ he laughed as he locked the chastity belt into place.
The toys trapped inside her body, the chastity belt a snug tight fit that filled Jane's inner cavities
with painful hot sauce coated dildos. The heat from the sauce painfully coating Jane's insides.
Her cunt walls and ass wanted to recoil from the burning sensation but to no avail... There could
be no escape from her ordeal, who-ever her boyfriend had hired knew his work all too well,
Jane's fragile mind still trying to cling onto the illusion that this was some sick and twisted
fantasy dreamed up by Jerry. A loud inhuman wailing sound, pitiful and pleading escaped the
Jane's lips before she recognised the voice as her own.
“Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah “ Jane's wailing voice filled the
basement as the heat from the sauce and the thickness of those two toys filled her tight holes.
Only ever having experienced anal sex once or twice before and being drunk both times. The
clamps on her sensitive parts as equally painful and causing her body similar feelings of painful
heat.
“Well K I reckon she must be liking that … you can hear it in her voice ...” J laughed as he
swung the crop in his hand... “time for some fun...”
The second one K struck Jane's carefully and leather framed exposed ass cheeks hard. The
leather covered paddle in his hand as his partner J started to deliver a series of hard stinging
blows across her tits with the shaft of the riding crop.
“Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ! “ Jane wailed, her cheeks red and stinging with tears, they
flowed almost constantly down her face, she could taste them upon her lips. “Please
stoppppppppppp........pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!” Jane cried out with each hard hot stinging
blow her body felt and received. Her sensitive clitoris and nipples tortured but the steel teeth of
the clamps as her body jerked and moved in a vain attempt to avoid her captors cruel affections
with that paddle and crop.
Each man alternating hands … switching from side to side so each ass cheek and tit received the
hot stinging touch of the studded paddle and crop, in equal force and measure.
“You know what K … we haven't used that blow torch in a while ? I feel like heating this bitch
up even more … “J said loudly above the smacks and whips of the crop and paddle.
“Yep J it has been a while...give it a go. The bitch ain’t screaming loud enough yet ...” His parter
K said gleefully, pausing long enough to examine Jane's pink and red ass cheeks. The marks of
the studs on her flesh.
J walked over to the wall and picked up a small gas bottle and blowtorch … lighting it's flame
then adjusting it till it turned blue.. “just right... now lets make the bitch really scream and
dance...” he joked as he returned to stand in front of the young girl in her torn and open black
nightie. Jane's exposed body lit under the blue flame's glow. “Don't worry bitch this is sure to
keep you warm and if you just happen to pass out we can always start again … “ J whispered in
Jane's ear. The blue flame passed close to the captive girl's skin .. Letting the flame pass over the
captive girl's tits then nipples, keeping it just out of reach.
Jane's eyes were wide with panic and real fear as she saw the bright blue hot glow of the flame
approach, “Noooooooooooooooooooo Pleassssseeeeee I'll do anything ….....Absolutely
anythinggggggggg, pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeee?” Jane begged through her tears her body shaking
with her deep sobs. Her arms pulled down as far as shackles allowed in a futile attempt to twist
and turn her body away from the flame. Jane's tortured mind fighting to remain in control of her
body, trying to block out the ordeal that she was under, the assault on her senses taking her
almost to the edge of sanity…
“Oh... We know you will do anything, I fucking promise you whore, only now let's see what this
does to your sensitive little buds …Shall we ? “ J said as he started to heat up the slim chains that
linked Jane's clamped nipples and clitoris. The heat being transferred down the chains, the
kinetic energy only adding to Jane's pain filled torment. The nightmare that her mind struggled
to comprehend never seeming to end.
“Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh fuckkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee !”
Screamed the girl as he pulled and jerked on the chains that held her, dancing like a captured
marionette.
The heat from the blue flame travelling up and down those slim chains, up to the clamps on
Jane's sensitive nipples and clitoris. The pain coming at her in seemingly never ending waves
that washed over her senses, the hot steel burning the girl's sensitive parts, making her pull and
struggle in vain. Trapped and held by those chains and heavy iron rings. Jane's chest heaving as
she sucked in air amid her tormentors cruel laughter. Feeling faint and light-headed, the hot
sauce on her insides matching the heat on those terrible steel clamps. Jane's head started to sag in
the Iron collar, her tear stained face red, her throat dry and hoarse from her screams until her eyes
closed … Passing out into the relative safety of unconsciousness.....